CHAPTER 1

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Story by Zayury
Pictures by Zayury

Originally posted at TSR on 8/23/07.


Hello everyone! I have never written a story before and this is my first attempt! I have been accused of being sarcastic and having a sick sense of humor!


Obviously my family doesn't know me very well! So I am writing these little fairytales to prove them wrong! I will now narrate my first story, "Zayury's Cinderella"!


Once upon a time in a beautiful small village...

there lived a sweet and pure young demoiselle named....Eh?!

I...aa, ammm, ahem... excuse me for a second...

Psst! Psst!

Ahem!! Cinderella!!

"Wwhaat? Oh, hi!"

Cinderella! I am telling your story, and you are suppose to be sweet and PURE!

"Oh! Yes, yes, of course! I'm sorry! Run along... what did you say your name was?"

"Rusty"

"Oh, yeah! Run along Rusty!"

Thank-you for waiting, sorry about that.

There lived a sweet and PURE young demoiselle named Cinderella!

"La, la la, la la..."

Cinderella would spend her days singing while doing her outside chores! Her sweet papa had been a wealthy landowner.

When he died she was left at the mercy of her mean stepmother and wicked stepsisters! Cinderella loved and missed her papa very much!

"Stupid, old man! I can't believe he didn't leave a will! For crying out loud old man! You never heard of being prepared! You #@$#@..."

Ahem, excuse me again!

Cinderella!! Hello?! Did you forget you have an audience?! Will you control yourself and pretend you loved your sweet papa!!

"Oh! hahaha, I'm sorry! Hahaha!"

"PAPAA! PAPAA!!! Oh, how can I go on without my dear sweet PAPA! bohoo, snif!"

Hmph! A little over the top... I guess it will do.

After doing her outside chores Cinderella would spend the rest of her day cleaning after her 2 wicked stepsisters, One and Two (sorry I can't remember their names)!

Oh for crying out loud! CINDERELLA!!!

Would you kindly stick to the story!! YOU are supposed to be cleaning after them! Not the other way around!

"Alright, alright! Jeez, talk about being a testy b..."

CINDERELLA! WE ALL CAN HEAR YOU!!

"Sorry..."

"I'm starting to hate "my" stupid story..."

"Oh, man! I think I broke a nail!"

I'm sorry about the delay ladies and gentlemen it's hard to get good fairytale help. Maybe this would be a good time to stop. I'm sure that with this little example I have proven my family is wrong about me! I hope you will return and read the next part of this story! Maybe if you are having problems sleeping this story will help you fall asleep, lol! See ya next time!

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3